altseggychrims remerge2

kay/alternateseggychristmas.fountain

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ INT. DARK TV ROOM - NIGHT
 
 Kay lies asleep, catatonic. She lies on her right side on the couch. Her boner is distincly visible via the bulge in her Illumination-Grinch pajamas. It flops down to the side with gravity and twitches with her. It rests on her meaty thighs, and there she lies; the embodiment of a closet furry bisexual chubby chaser's wet dream.
 
-/*I want her to have a seggy pet name for me. i guess I'll go with subby for now? I could probably think of something better but idk.*/
+[[I want her to have a seggy pet name for me. i guess I'll go with subby for now? I could probably think of something better but idk.]]
 Her *moans* get too loud for her to remain asleep and she wakes. The moan that wakes her forms a word:
 
 KAY
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ Subby-
 
 She sits up. We follow her, our view as disorienting as her mood. She sits up, shaking her head and massaging her penis. She bites her lip and blearily wanders through the dark house, hand still stimulating herself. She briefly checks her apple watch. '4:30 AM'.
 
-/*she says this to convince herself it's ok to */
+[[she says this to convince herself it's ok to]]
 KAY
 (mumbled)
 No work in the morning.
@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ She wanders down a hallway to their shared OFFICE.
 
 INT. DARK OFFICE - NIGHT
 
-The regular computer-emitted fan noises and light isn't present. Her tired eyes note only this.
+The regular computer-emitted fan noises and light aren't present. Her tired eyes note only this.
 
 KAY
 (mumbled)
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ INT. CLOSET SHELF
 
 We see a closet shelf housing several of the couple's favorite tools: a leather choker-like leash and collar, a ball gag, varying lengths of soft black nylon rope. Kay takes them.
 
-/*initially intended as a tie to the wall, makes a bit more sense for the leash to be present if she ties his wrists instead*/
+[[initially intended as a tie to the wall, makes a bit more sense for the leash to be present if she ties his wrists instead]]
 When the bed is finally approached, she lies the tools down on it, puts her hand in front of Nathan's face for a couple seconds, then pulls the covers off him. Nothing but boxers shroud his feminine ass, which distracts Kay. She caresses him, shifting up and down from his thighs to above his hips. She snaps back to focus, equipping his gag, /*tying him to the clearly intentional mounted metal loop above their also clearly intentional less extravagant headboard.*/ binding his wrists and ankles. His boxers are slipped off, the leash is secured. Kay's Grinch PJs and accompanying plain boxers come off and she gets right into pleasuring herself with him. She thrusts into him, upright, with him bent over the edge of the bed. A *moan* of satisfaction and release escapes her. She chuckles erotically through her nose as she proceeds to pound him. It's clear she needed this.
 
 Nathan wakes, *moaning alongside her.* Noting this, Kay leans down, nibbling his ear.
@@ -70,29 +70,37 @@ KAY
 (laughing)
 Calm down, subby.
 
-We see a view of her from the bed, facing the door. Her gray T-shirt emblazened with the word 'PROVO' is the only thing that shields us from her large, bouncing breasts. Her expression is as lustful as can be expected. A SHADOW approaches from the door. It speaks.
+We see a view of her from the bed, facing the door. Her gray T-shirt emblazened with the word 'PROVO' is the only thing that shields us from her large, bouncing breasts. Her expression is as lustful as can be expected. Nathan continues to moan and struggle in protest.
+
+KAY
+This is quite the performance,  I'm impressed.
+
+A moment passes, then a SHADOW approaches from the door. It speaks.
 
 SHADOW
 Nathan, are you being horny without me ag- WHAT THE FUCK?
 
-Kay's eyes widen immensely as the light *clicks* on, but immediately turn to squinting at the brightness. The figure at the door is strikingly similar to her. Furry, big fuzzy tail, somewhat canid face, thick thighs and arms, cute PJs grudgingly concealing her bulge. But she has brown hair, brown eyes, far more toned muscles, a Studio Ghibli mashup shirt. She's a red panda. And she's glaring at Kay with fury, who stumbles back, awkwardly pulling out to stare incredulously at the strange woman across from her.
+Kay's eyes widen immensely as the light *clicks* on, but immediately turn to squinting at the brightness. The figure at the door is strikingly similar to her. Furry, big fuzzy tail, somewhat canid face, thick thighs and arms, cute PJs grudgingly concealing her bulge. But she has brown hair, brown eyes, far more toned muscles, a Studio Ghibli mashup shirt. She's a red panda. And she's glaring at Kay with fury, who stumbles back, awkwardly pulling out to stare incredulously at the unfamiliar woman across from her.
+
+KAY
+Wha-
 
 SARA
 WHO THE FUCK ARE YOU, BITCH?
 
 SARA lunges at Kay, tackling her into the headboard, which makes a terrible crunching sound. Sara punches Kay three times in the face. Right, right, left. Stunned, Kay grabs Sara's right as it attempts another blow. She pushes against her full mass, launching Sara into the far wall, destroying the drywall. Nathan lets out a gagged yell in protest.
 
-Kay follows up, lunging at Sara, who dodges and punches Kay in her exposed groin in one motion. She stumbles back, but not before Sara can't grab her by the neck and land another blow to the face.
+Kay follows up, lunging at Sara, who dodges and punches Kay in her exposed groin in one motion. She stumbles back, but not before Sara grabs her by the neck and lands another blow to her face.
 
 The next few moments are quick. Kay attempts a right hook, which is deflected by Sara, who attempts an uppercut, which is caught by Kay's free hand. Once over the surprise, they're perfectly in sync in hand to hand combat. They push each other away and simultaneously unsheath their weapons.
 
 The Acriamative flashes, and Sara's double shortswords rise to meet it. A deafening CLANG emits. Both women and the captive Nathan stare in shock and awe at the reveal.
 
-Beat.
+(beat)
 
 Both women yell and attempt to hit each other. It's clear neither of them are practiced swordswomen, though Sara quickly unmounts her weapons from their armbands to unlock a better range of motion. Neither can deflect the other's hits, and deep gashes open in both of them. Kay's blood is a dark pink, while Sara's is a dark aquamarine. The walls are heavily damaged by this exchange and the fight stumbles back into the TV room. Nathan hastily attempts to crawl and then awkwardly hop to follow, terrified.
 
-INT. TV ROOM
+.FIGHT TO TV ROOM
 
 The room is only illuminated by the light streaming through destroyed bedroom wall. Kay shoves Sara to the ground and raises the Acriamative, but Sara shakily raises her weapons to attempt to deflect it.
 
@@ -161,7 +169,7 @@ SARA
 Nathan, call Delta Jay.
 
 
-/*replace IMC with whatever fictional or otherwise realistic faction I want Delta Jay to be a part of*/
+[[replace IMC with whatever fictional or otherwise realistic faction I want Delta Jay to be a part of]]
 KAY
 Why would you call him, he's *my* IMC liason.
 
@@ -202,7 +210,7 @@ Sara shakes her head in disbelief.
 SARA
 What?
 
-Sara combines her two sword whips into one.
+Sara combines her two sword whips into one warily.
 
 KAY
 My question is, how the fuck did you hide an entire marriage from me *and* manage to convince *her* she owns our house. I thought you were a genius, but apparently you're stupid enough to think I wouldn't find out about this shit.
@@ -296,8 +304,7 @@ Sara's a very common name. I only know one Kalani.
 KAY
 You sound exactly like her though. We both went to Jordan, but didn't properly meet until Nathan invited us both over for a movie night. I thought you were pretty hot but I thought you two were dating otherwise...
 
-NATHAN
-(muffled from bedroom)
+NATHAN (O.S.)
 Oh, no way.
 
 SARA
@@ -343,7 +350,7 @@ Yeah, when I thought it was you!
 KAY
 Guys, stop. We're all the victims of a misunderstanding, not rape. Nathan talks about this shit all the time.
 
-Cut to the three sitting down, fully clothed. Kay is on the corner of the sectional, Sara on one of the ends, Nathan on the ottoman inbetween them. The three of them sip sodas from the mini-fridge.
+Cut to the three sitting down, fully clothed, besides the torn shirts and blood. Nathan's ballgag is replaced by a choker. Kay is on the corner of the sectional, Sara on one of the ends, Nathan on the ottoman inbetween them. The three of them sip sodas from the mini-fridge.
 
 /*
 alternate confrontation/realization
@@ -351,7 +358,7 @@ alternate confrontation/realization
 NATHAN
 How come you two are the only two superhuman, humanoid lifeforms with conjurable custom weapons on this earth?
 
-Beat.
+(beat)
 
 KAY
 I got my powers because of you.
@@ -364,13 +371,13 @@ What we're going to do is we're going to describe our relationship with the othe
 
 She pauses.
 
-/*perhaps it's out of character to be as upfront as she is about this so this can be trimmed*/
-KAY (CONT.)
+[[perhaps it's out of character to be as upfront as she is about this so this can be trimmed]]
+KAY
 I was very self-conscious about my weight. It was kind of... destroying my life. I pushed away my roommates and family and lived on my own, I was too depressed and anxious to go to school, I wasn't paying bills, all I was doing was exercising and eating. But I couldn't lose weight. It was like I was cursed. So I stopped eating. I starved myself, but my damn scale wouldn't move an ounce. I thought I was going crazy. One day I collapsed on the treadmill and blacked out. When I woke up, I was in another world. I was transformed, I wasn't human anymore. I had to fight monsters and survive, and all the while I knew he did it.
 
 She points at Nathan. Sara puts a hand to her mouth in realization.
 
-KAY (CONT.)
+KAY
 I had powers. Super strength. My hyperhydrosis turned into something different. I still sweat a ton, but it wasn't gross anymore. I had healing powers. I can control things with my pheromones, I could knock things out.
 
 Sara and Nathan exchange glances several times. Nathan snaps incessantly.
@@ -380,12 +387,12 @@ I don't sweat very much at all, but I can do all those things too, it's just a l
 
 Kay nods.
 
-KAY (CONT.)
+KAY
 Hang on. So when I finally found out how to return to this world, I started stalking him. Found his streams, twitter, everything. My entire life was all about figuring out how to live with my new form and figuring out everything about him. That and... anyway, I was obsessed, I wanted to own him. /*I began to sneak into his house in the dead of night and...*/ Well eventually it drove me insane and I wanted to be with him in person, so I devised a way to use my pheromones to trick people into thinking I looked completely human. Doesn't work on video obviously but anyone who was within a couple feet of me saw me as how I used to be. I went to his work with a mask and sunglasses to hide most of my appearance, walked right up to him and...
 
 She sighs. Nathan stims by bobbing his leg and swilling his soda around in the can. Sara similarly bobs her leg.
 
-KAY (CONT.)
+KAY
 Eventually I snuck into his house, we had a consensual kidnapping, it was really romantic and hot, he loved it, he always loved being put in his place by me. We dated ever since. We moved in together, he told me how he thought my powers worked, we trained together, took up vigilantism, got picked up by the IMC, eventually we worked out a deal where they supported my efforts and sent me on missions while Nathan stayed at home being a boywife. I was going to surprise him with another kidnapping and proposing to him... somewhere special, I don't know. Now I'm not even sure if that was real or anything because you don't remember at all, and...
 
 Her voice breaks, she looks away. A pause.
@@ -465,8 +472,8 @@ She's not *my* Kalani.
 SARA
 Our *universe's* Kalani.
 
-NATHAN (CONT.)
-Your personality is entirely different from our Kalani though.
+NATHAN
+Your personality is entirely different from our universe's Kalani though.
 
 KAY
 Yeah, I've been through a lot. You stopped talking to me when I was like, twenty.
@@ -549,14 +556,96 @@ Nathan jumps up.
 NATHAN
 And who am I to leave my wife unemployed? Anyhow, I say we go get some McDick's. Both of you must be starving and you've got cells to regenerate. I'll get the keys, babe.
 
-He prances out of the room, sipping his soda. Both women follow his ass with their eyes, and then they quickly snap to each other.
+[[really needed to be said]]
+SARA
+We're not going anywhere until we find out where she's from, why she's here, and how to get rid of her. She could still be lying about all of this.
+
+KAY
+I can't lie with him in the room, he's not mine, but he's still Nathan.
+
+NATHAN
+That's- okay. Oddly familiar.
+
+He sits back down.
+
+SARA
+Stop doing that. This has to be some sort of hit operation. The IMC augmented someone to come in as an actor to either kill me or sabotage our marriage.
+
+KAY
+How would the IMC know about our trust pact thing?
+
+SARA
+He's always going off about honesty. Delta Jay must have known and snitched.
+
+KAY
+Oh! They don't know he has a rape fetish.
+
+NATHAN
+Don't put it that way.
+
+SARA
+Even if you *are* from another universe, why come here to fuck someone else's husband?
+
+KAY
+I *didn't,* I wouldn't. I like my husband all to myself and I wouldn't steal someone else's, it'd kill him. I woke up here, right on the couch. Thought it was my house.
+(beat)
+
+SARA
+But how did you get there.
+
+KAY
+Maybe I dreamed too hard. Maybe this is a dream borne out of my insecurities knowing he'd be with you given the choice. All I know is I woke up horny and all three of us can't blame each other for that.
+
+Nathan makes a confused noise.
+
+SARA
+Ok, fine. If you got here by sleeping, you can leave by sleeping. Can I kill you?
+
+NATHAN
+Consent is key.
+
+KAY
+Bitch, you can try. I was winning anyway.
+
+SARA
+As if. I'll send you back right now.
+
+She resheathes only a small section of her resting weapon; a single stealth knife.
+
+NATHAN
+Let's... not be too stab-happy. Even if you can kill her and she doesn't come back, how do you know that she's returned and you haven't just killed her?
+
+KAY
+Yeah I don't wanna die, not without cumming first.
+
+SARA
+Find someone else to help you with that.
+
+NATHAN
+Help! Of course, we'll take her to the IMC ASAP after mcdeez. They'll be fascinated with her, remember the Lab, Sara?
+
+Sara squints with frustration upon remembering. Nathan gets up again.
+
+SARA
+I try not to.
+
+NATHAN
+Ok, that's a deal! This is going to be the best magdondal trip yet. I can ask you all about your universe and how it's different and how it's the same, just amazing!
+
+He prances out of the room, sipping his soda.
+
+NATHAN
+(laughing)
+Oh, merry fuckin' Christmas!
+
+Both women follow his ass with their eyes, and then they quickly snap to each other.
 
 SARA
 I'm a master of stealth. Try to fuck him again and I'll kill you. What's more is that he'll probably let you and then I'll divorce him and he'll die alone.
 
 Kay gets up, examines her bloody shirt, and sheathes the Acriamative as she talks, taking several steps away from Sara.
 
-/*Something in this conversation needs to address how she got there in the first place and therefore how to get her back. Perhaps after MCD they go to alpha jay or perhaps nafan and sara already figured out something though that's less likely*/
+[[Something in this conversation needs to address how she got there in the first place and therefore how to get her back. Perhaps after MCD they go to delta jay or perhaps nafan and sara already figured out something though that's less likely]]
 
 KAY
 And then when I figure out how to return to my universe you'll get lonely and ressurrect him, I get it. He's all yours. Though the offer's still on the table, he always said you were secretly bi and I'd fuck the shit out of both of you in a heartbeat.
@@ -570,4 +659,4 @@ SARA
 (grumbling)
 That's what I'm afraid of.
 
-/*her return to her original universe is indicative of how much the experience changed her. rather than returning to do honry things to nafan in his sleep, she wakes him up, something he normally hates and thus she would never do, to ensure he knows who she is and that they're actually together. He's confused but gives her the information she needed, she sleepily says she'll tell him in the morning.*/
+[[her return to her original universe is indicative of how much the experience changed her. rather than returning to do honry things to nafan in his sleep, she wakes him up, something he normally hates and thus she would never do, to ensure he knows who she is and that they're actually together. He's confused but gives her the information she needed, she sleepily says she'll tell him in the morning.]]