From 13ef9875348cebf5f89aea2f44a5224122650c2b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Raincloud Date: Sat, 19 Apr 2025 15:46:09 -0600 Subject: [PATCH] reprobatereveal merge3 --- streamUniverse/reprobatereveal.fountain | 4 ++ streamUniverse/reprobatereveal_003.fountain | 66 --------------------- 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 66 deletions(-) delete mode 100644 streamUniverse/reprobatereveal_003.fountain diff --git a/streamUniverse/reprobatereveal.fountain b/streamUniverse/reprobatereveal.fountain index a254ca8..c66c5d0 100644 --- a/streamUniverse/reprobatereveal.fountain +++ b/streamUniverse/reprobatereveal.fountain @@ -3,6 +3,8 @@ Credit: Written by Author: Nathan Lindsay Notes: notes app 2022-07-25 @ 3:56am +/*perhaps what they stand on is a garbled version of the walk in closet or a pc component or something like that. all I know is I want them to have a magic fight within their shared consciousness that resolves in them stopping fighting, nebula vs gamorra guardians 2 style.*/ + Raincloud and Reprobate are sitting atop [idk] eating an unhealthy amount corn dogs and fries. RAINCLOUD @@ -29,6 +31,8 @@ Okay it’s really weird we’ve got ears this time around. Actual ears! He holds them incredulously. Reprobate twitches his curiously. +/*this line doesn't make sense if reprobate snuck in the thicc thighs... must rewrite.*/ + REPROBATE I know! I’m surprised we can even move them ourselves, you’d think we wouldn’t know how. Actually, didn’t you give us them yourself, on purpose? You designed our body. diff --git a/streamUniverse/reprobatereveal_003.fountain b/streamUniverse/reprobatereveal_003.fountain deleted file mode 100644 index c66c5d0..0000000 --- a/streamUniverse/reprobatereveal_003.fountain +++ /dev/null @@ -1,66 +0,0 @@ -Title: reprobatereveal -Credit: Written by -Author: Nathan Lindsay -Notes: notes app 2022-07-25 @ 3:56am - -/*perhaps what they stand on is a garbled version of the walk in closet or a pc component or something like that. all I know is I want them to have a magic fight within their shared consciousness that resolves in them stopping fighting, nebula vs gamorra guardians 2 style.*/ - -Raincloud and Reprobate are sitting atop [idk] eating an unhealthy amount corn dogs and fries. - -RAINCLOUD -Why have you got to be so dramatic? - -REPROBATE -Seriously? I don’t know how else I’m supposed to work. Do I just walk right in unannounced? Or maybe just start slowly dissociating you? My name’s not freaking Gabriel. Best to just get it over with quick and move on, if that’s *dramatic* to you I don’t know what to tell you man. - -As Reprobate speaks, he attempts to dip his corn dog in fry sauce. The sauce cup is too small, so he flicks it out of existence in a magical purplish smokey disappearance. The effect has two distinct layers, one the color of rainy’s scales, the other of reprobate’s accenting it. He conjures a brandless bottle of fry sauce and ejects its seemingly infinite contents into the boat of fries. His dipping efforts are satisfied by this. - -RAINCLOUD -We could have talked about it, we’re talking about it right now. - -REPROBATE -All of this is figurative, we’ve been talking about it this entire time if you really think about it. - -RAINCLOUD -Well isn’t that just splitting hairs… - -Reprobate conjures another corn dog. As he unsheathes it, he gives it comedic length. Raincloud looks across the cosmos of their shared consciousness. - -RAINCLOUD -Okay it’s really weird we’ve got ears this time around. Actual ears! - -He holds them incredulously. Reprobate twitches his curiously. - -/*this line doesn't make sense if reprobate snuck in the thicc thighs... must rewrite.*/ - -REPROBATE -I know! I’m surprised we can even move them ourselves, you’d think we wouldn’t know how. Actually, didn’t you give us them yourself, on purpose? You designed our body. - -RAINCLOUD -Yeah, I thought I’d try em out this time around. I remember I used to see other dragons with them and I’d think, ‘oh wow, they’re so ugly, they look incredibly bovine, disgusting.’ but they’re pretty cute right? - -REPROBATE -Yes, indubitably. - -Reprobate conjures another, even longer corn dog. Raincloud watches him, cringing slightly. - -RAINCLOUD -You’re going to get fat if you keep eating those. - -REPROBATE -(defensively) -I’m a growing boy! I need *something* to keep me going. Besides, how do you think we’re supposed to maintain these curves? - -He pauses to huffily dip his dog and take another bite. - -REPROBATE -(muffled) -And so will you! - -RAINCLOUD -Wait, did you edit my genetic template when I was building our body? I knew something was off when I woke up. I thought something had gone wrong, that freaked me out! - -Reprobate’s head is turned away. We build up to him slowly turning. His eyes are murderous; all we see are the galaxy that effectively makes up the whites of his eyes. Extreme close up. - -REPROBATE -Rainy. We need these thick thighs.