From 04c3fba1439108bed2249c07865e3d661b996334 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Raincloud Date: Sat, 19 Apr 2025 15:45:47 -0600 Subject: [PATCH] reprobatereveal merge2 --- streamUniverse/reprobatereveal.fountain | 2 +- streamUniverse/reprobatereveal_002.fountain | 62 --------------------- 2 files changed, 1 insertion(+), 63 deletions(-) delete mode 100644 streamUniverse/reprobatereveal_002.fountain diff --git a/streamUniverse/reprobatereveal.fountain b/streamUniverse/reprobatereveal.fountain index 6d0b52c..a254ca8 100644 --- a/streamUniverse/reprobatereveal.fountain +++ b/streamUniverse/reprobatereveal.fountain @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ And so will you! RAINCLOUD Wait, did you edit my genetic template when I was building our body? I knew something was off when I woke up. I thought something had gone wrong, that freaked me out! -Reprobate’s head is turned away. We build up to him slowly turning. His eyes are murderous. Extreme close up. +Reprobate’s head is turned away. We build up to him slowly turning. His eyes are murderous; all we see are the galaxy that effectively makes up the whites of his eyes. Extreme close up. REPROBATE Rainy. We need these thick thighs. diff --git a/streamUniverse/reprobatereveal_002.fountain b/streamUniverse/reprobatereveal_002.fountain deleted file mode 100644 index a254ca8..0000000 --- a/streamUniverse/reprobatereveal_002.fountain +++ /dev/null @@ -1,62 +0,0 @@ -Title: reprobatereveal -Credit: Written by -Author: Nathan Lindsay -Notes: notes app 2022-07-25 @ 3:56am - -Raincloud and Reprobate are sitting atop [idk] eating an unhealthy amount corn dogs and fries. - -RAINCLOUD -Why have you got to be so dramatic? - -REPROBATE -Seriously? I don’t know how else I’m supposed to work. Do I just walk right in unannounced? Or maybe just start slowly dissociating you? My name’s not freaking Gabriel. Best to just get it over with quick and move on, if that’s *dramatic* to you I don’t know what to tell you man. - -As Reprobate speaks, he attempts to dip his corn dog in fry sauce. The sauce cup is too small, so he flicks it out of existence in a magical purplish smokey disappearance. The effect has two distinct layers, one the color of rainy’s scales, the other of reprobate’s accenting it. He conjures a brandless bottle of fry sauce and ejects its seemingly infinite contents into the boat of fries. His dipping efforts are satisfied by this. - -RAINCLOUD -We could have talked about it, we’re talking about it right now. - -REPROBATE -All of this is figurative, we’ve been talking about it this entire time if you really think about it. - -RAINCLOUD -Well isn’t that just splitting hairs… - -Reprobate conjures another corn dog. As he unsheathes it, he gives it comedic length. Raincloud looks across the cosmos of their shared consciousness. - -RAINCLOUD -Okay it’s really weird we’ve got ears this time around. Actual ears! - -He holds them incredulously. Reprobate twitches his curiously. - -REPROBATE -I know! I’m surprised we can even move them ourselves, you’d think we wouldn’t know how. Actually, didn’t you give us them yourself, on purpose? You designed our body. - -RAINCLOUD -Yeah, I thought I’d try em out this time around. I remember I used to see other dragons with them and I’d think, ‘oh wow, they’re so ugly, they look incredibly bovine, disgusting.’ but they’re pretty cute right? - -REPROBATE -Yes, indubitably. - -Reprobate conjures another, even longer corn dog. Raincloud watches him, cringing slightly. - -RAINCLOUD -You’re going to get fat if you keep eating those. - -REPROBATE -(defensively) -I’m a growing boy! I need *something* to keep me going. Besides, how do you think we’re supposed to maintain these curves? - -He pauses to huffily dip his dog and take another bite. - -REPROBATE -(muffled) -And so will you! - -RAINCLOUD -Wait, did you edit my genetic template when I was building our body? I knew something was off when I woke up. I thought something had gone wrong, that freaked me out! - -Reprobate’s head is turned away. We build up to him slowly turning. His eyes are murderous; all we see are the galaxy that effectively makes up the whites of his eyes. Extreme close up. - -REPROBATE -Rainy. We need these thick thighs.